Corrections of presentation slides:
slide 5: tickets are expensive if you wait until the last moment,
slide 7: journeys are cheaper
traditional airline companies have adjusted their prices.
Communication
The transitions between speakers were good, and the presentation was quite easy to follow. Sometimes individuals were difficult to understand and not all the important material was shown on the slides.
Slides
Nice presentation, but some English errors.
Content
Slides 5 and 6 seemed to repeat very similar information (disadvantages) and the overall impression was of a non-debate - you did not seem to find an issue (problem, question) to investigate.
Specific comments on oral language
Slide 1 (Pascal)
You need to stand where you can see the screen and the audience. You sound very hesitant (one VERY long pause); you didn't practice enough.
Slide 3, 4 (Jean Sebastien)
Good speed, but not always easy to understand. Some important information seems missing from Slide 3.
paCIFic
beGINNing
suCCESS
since 10 years we have more than 5%
LUGgage
Slide 5 (Jessica)
You sound rather hesitant and stilted. You need to speak more loudly and slightly more quickly. More practice needed.
disadVANTages
if you want UNTIL the last minute
Slide 6 (Florent)
You made a good effort to learn the specific vocabulary (headrest covers), your delivery is good. You should work on speaking a little more quickly.
CANCelled
you must to wait > you have to wait (you must wait)
to catch a round-trip ticket > to buy a round-trip ticket
Slide 7 (Pascal)
Better fluency, but problems pronouncing plural and 3rd person singular s in present tense, and not always easy to understand.
IAE Group 3 Team A :
Jessica Lessaulnier, Pascal Luer
J-Sébastien Martinez, Florent Orsero
Topic : Low cost air companies, are they worth it ?
Our presentation :
http://www.slideshare.net/secret/AlRiPTT2GEKLvN
Corrections of presentation slides:
slide 5: tickets are expensive if you wait until the last moment,
slide 7: journeys are cheaper
traditional airline companies have adjusted their prices.
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Summary :
General Comments
Communication
The transitions between speakers were good, and the presentation was quite easy to follow. Sometimes individuals were difficult to understand and not all the important material was shown on the slides.
Slides
Nice presentation, but some English errors.
Content
Slides 5 and 6 seemed to repeat very similar information (disadvantages) and the overall impression was of a non-debate - you did not seem to find an issue (problem, question) to investigate.
Specific comments on oral language
Slide 1 (Pascal)
You need to stand where you can see the screen and the audience. You sound very hesitant (one VERY long pause); you didn't practice enough.
Slide 3, 4 (Jean Sebastien)
Good speed, but not always easy to understand. Some important information seems missing from Slide 3.
paCIFic
beGINNing
suCCESS
since 10 years we have more than 5%
LUGgage
Slide 5 (Jessica)
You sound rather hesitant and stilted. You need to speak more loudly and slightly more quickly. More practice needed.
disadVANTages
if you want UNTIL the last minute
Slide 6 (Florent)
You made a good effort to learn the specific vocabulary (headrest covers), your delivery is good. You should work on speaking a little more quickly.
CANCelled
you must to wait > you have to wait (you must wait)
to catch a round-trip ticket > to buy a round-trip ticket
Slide 7 (Pascal)
Better fluency, but problems pronouncing plural and 3rd person singular s in present tense, and not always easy to understand.
deMOCratises
low cost companies